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Greg Fergus

192 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 15 wordsI rise to pay tribute to a true mother of Confederation, the Hon. Jean Augustine.Procedure Claims · 134 wordsJean is in Ottawa today to receive the Pearson Laureate Award, its highest honour, joining such past honourees whose leadership has helped make Canada a better country, including Jean Chrétien, Joe Clark and Irwin Cotler.5 Born in Grenada, she emigrated to Canada in 1960 under the West Indian domestic scheme, the same scheme under which my mother came to Canada.6 She worked in education, and later served on the founding committee to organize Caribana, now known as the Toronto Caribbean Carnival.7 Jean Augustine was the first Black woman elected to the House of Commons in 1993, 3and became the first Black woman to serve in a federal cabinet.4 She introduced the motion to recognize February as Black History Month.1 She also introduced a motion to have the Famous Five monument erected on Parliament Hill.2 Thanks · 34 wordsOn behalf of the entire House, I would like to salute Jean Augustine for her life of public service, and thank her for helping make Canada the modern and inclusive country we enjoy today.Thanks The ask · 9 wordsI hope all members will join us this evening— Some hon. members: Oh, oh!

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