“Mr. Speaker, we know that the Liberals keep backtracking on environmental issues time and again. Their backtracking even led the member for Laurier—Sainte-Marie to resign. Despite all this backtracking, the Liberals keep repeating that they will meet their greenhouse gas reduction targets. We are wondering how. That is why, last Thursday, the Bloc Québécois demanded to see the figures the Liberals are using as the basis for their claim that emissions will fall despite all the measures they have sacrificed. The minister did not have that data. Now does she have the figures on the impact of the backtracking announced this year?”
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 20 wordsthe Bloc Québécois likes to talk about backtracking, Off pointbut perhaps we could focus more on the progress we have made.PositioningPartly on pointProcedure · 13 wordsWhat progress is that?I could talk about the tightening of methane regulations: ProcedureClaims · 8 wordsThat alone will reduce emissions by 400 megatonnes.1Partly on pointProcedure · 12 wordsI could talk about what we have done on the electricity front.ProcedureClaims · 34 wordsIn fact, we gave Hydro-Québec exactly what it asked for in order to have a stronger and more resilient electricity grid.2We are getting the job done and reducing emissions at the same time.Partly on pointVague promise