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David McGuinty

105 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Laila Goodridge (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada is the only country in the G7 in a recession. After two straight quarters of economic decline, the consequences are everywhere. One in four Canadians is food-insecure. Millions of people are struggling to put food on the table. Canadians are cutting back and lining up at food banks, yet reports of the Prime Minister’s lavish catering and elite events continue to pile up. The Prime Minister spent more money on airplane food for three flights than the average family would spend on food for an entire decade. How can the Prime Minister justify spending so lavishly while Canadian families are struggling to afford the basics?”
Statement grade
F
38 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 34%Claims 60%Procedure 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 14 wordsI am glad the member for Fort McMurray—Cold Lake rose to ask the question.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 31 wordsIt is important for her to remind her constituents that we are investing between $3 billion and $4 billion in her riding.1 We are making massive investments in the base there.Off point Positioning · 3 wordsShe knows so.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 32 wordsWe also announced a very progressive move to procure the GlobalEye plane with Saab last week, with 3,000 new jobs in Canadian aerospace and defence and 22,000 jobs in Canadian multi-mission aircraft.234Off point Procedure · 6 wordsThe list goes on and on.Procedure Positioning · 19 wordsI know the Conservatives do not want to hear it. They are too busy running down this beautiful country.PositioningOff point

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