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Chris Bittle

133 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Grant Jackson (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, in picking up exactly where the member left off, I will say that am quite curious about protecting defence industrial capability. We heard a lot from the member and from the Prime Minister about Saab and the agreement on surveillance planes. We are all wondering when the government is going to make the decision on our next fighter jet capability. I understand there have been promises from Saab about eastern Canadian jobs but very little about that for western Canada, if the Gripen is to be produced in Canada. Meanwhile, many good jobs in Winnipeg are based at Magellan Aerospace, which makes the entire tail fin component of the F-35. I am wondering if the member is going to advocate just as strongly for aerospace industry jobs in Manitoba as he is for those in eastern Canada.”
Statement grade
B–
Average 72 / 100
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Claims 86%Positioning 8%Procedure 6%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 74 wordsI think we are falling into an old debate in a system where we were not spending enough on defence. We were all concerned about not everyone getting a piece of the pie. We are in a situation now where if we are at 2%, which we are, going to 3.5%, there is an opportunity for the manufacturing sector, not just in Ontario but also in Manitoba.1 We have heard announcements across the country. Positioning · 10 wordsThe old saying “A rising tide lifts all boats” applies.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 8 wordsThis is something we can see right now.Procedure Claims · 41 wordsThough I cannot speak about and have no insider information on what will happen next with our next fighter purchase, I know that it will benefit not only just one area of the country but from coast to coast to coast.Partly on pointUnearned certainty

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