Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Eric Lefebvre

167 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

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Claims 27%Anecdote 26%Thanks 16%The ask 25%Aside 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 45 wordsthis year, the Victoriaville CEGEP’s Vulkins sports program is proudly celebrating its 55th anniversary.1 For over half a century, the Vulkins have embodied the pursuit of excellence, perseverance and teamwork. The CEGEP’s dynamic teams and athletes have made Victoriaville famous across Quebec and far beyond. Anecdote · 43 wordsThis anniversary is significant for me personally because my brother Carl and I were lucky enough to wear Vulkin purple. During our time as Vulkin athletes, we developed values, friendships and a sense of belonging that have stayed with us to this day.Anecdote Thanks · 27 wordsI want to pay tribute to all the generations of athletes, coaches, volunteers and staff members who built the big Vulkin family over the past 55 years.Thanks The ask · 41 wordsI also want to take this opportunity to invite all alumni and members of the public to the Vulkin reunion from October 9 to 11 and to the inauguration of the Boralex sports centre, 2which is happening around the same time. Aside · 11 wordsAs they say in Victoriaville, once a Vulkin, always a Vulkin.Aside

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