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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 138 wordsthis weekend, from June 5 to 7, thousands will gather in Stony Plain to enjoy the Stony Plain Farmers’ Days Rodeo and Exhibition.1Organized in partnership with the Kinsmen Club of Stony Plain, Farmers’ Days showcases the agricultural heritage, community spirit and volunteerism that make our region such a special place to call home.For three days, Stony Plain will come alive with the Kinsmen rodeo, parades down Main Street, a midway with games and live entertainment, and the Farmers’ Days market featuring over 160 vendors.2Families can enjoy activities, from the heavy horse pull to train rides and petting zoos, that are fun for the whole family.Farmers’ Days is a celebration of the best of our Parkland region: our hard-working people, volunteers, local businesses and the strong community spirit that brings neighbours together, year after year.The ask · 13 wordsI invite everyone to come and enjoy this great celebration in our region.Thanks · 35 wordsFinally, I want to thank the Town of Stony Plain, the Kinsmen Club, the sponsors, the volunteers and the organizers for making this celebration possible.I wish everyone a fun and enjoyable Farmers’ Days weekend.Thanks