Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Sima Acan

159 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

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Thanks 19%Claims 72%Anecdote 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 24 wordsI rise today to recognize the outstanding young leaders of the Oakville West Youth Council, who are joining us here on Parliament Hill today.Thanks Claims · 94 wordsThis has been a remarkable year for this group. Together we visited the Halton Regional Police Service headquarters to see the work that our law enforcement does, Sheridan College to learn about future career paths to pursue and Oakville Museum to learn about why Black History Month is important and Oakville’s contribution to it.123 They also participated in a mock committee study on artificial intelligence, among many other meaningful experiences, including today’s meet-and-greet with the Prime Minister.45 At every step, they have demonstrated curiosity, leadership and genuine commitment to learning and serving their communities. Anecdote · 13 wordsSpending time with these young people gives me tremendous hope for the future.Anecdote Claims · 21 wordsThey are thoughtful, driven and deeply engaged. They are not simply preparing to become leaders someday; they are already leading today. Thanks · 7 wordsI thank the Oakville West Youth Council.Thanks

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