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Andréanne Larouche

123 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Claude DeBellefeuille (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to congratulate my colleague from Shefford, who really knows her stuff, as members can see. She always speaks so eloquently and focuses on the common good. She is well versed in this issue. I would like to learn more about the amendments the Bloc Québécois would have liked to see adopted to further improve the situation. Can she explain to me why, in her view, the government rejected these amendments?”
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76 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 20%Procedure 4%Claims 74%Reasoning 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 24 wordsI thank my colleague for her question and comments about my speech. I also want to commend her for fighting for the feminist cause.Thanks Procedure · 5 wordsRegarding the Bloc Québécois’s amendments, ProcedureClaims · 72 wordsas I mentioned earlier, there are some inconsistencies. For example, the offence of criminal harassment is supposedly being modernized by the introduction of objective criteria. However, when we talk about sureties to keep the peace—the infamous peace bonds under section 810 of the Criminal Code, 1which is another study that I worked on for the Bloc Québécois, together with my Conservative colleagues—it is clear that, in this case, the criteria are subjective.2 Reasoning · 3 wordsThat creates inconsistencies. Claims · 19 wordsThe Bloc Québécois wanted to see fewer of them. Our amendments sought to remove these inconsistencies from Bill C‑16.3Partly on point

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