Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Claims 67%Thanks 19%Reasoning 14%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 107 wordsI rise today to celebrate the remarkable life of Mr. Johnny Pauls, who passed away at the age of 102.1Johnny Pauls was among the last surviving veterans of the Second World War from our province.2He served as a member of the merchant marines.3His contributions helped secure the freedoms we continue to cherish today.Born in Rencontre East, he later moved his home to beautiful Spaniard’s Bay.4Johnny Pauls spent his life on the water, and in his retirement enjoyed gardening, hunting and fishing.He dedicated more than 75 years to the Royal Canadian Legion as a founding member of branch 9 in Spaniard’s Bay.5Thanks · 18 wordsToday I extend my deepest condolences to his family, friends and all those whose lives he has touched.ThanksReasoning · 23 wordsMay we honour his memory by striving every day to live up to his standard of service to the country and his community.Thanks · 12 wordsI thank Mr. Pauls for his service.May he rest in peace.Thanks