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John Zerucelli

102 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to David Bexte (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, under the Prime Minister, Canada is the only G20 country in a recession. Canadians are being told to tighten their belts while the Prime Minister cannot stop spending. On a single trip, taxpayers were billed more than $17,000 for salmon, which is more than many Canadian families spend on food for an entire year. Meanwhile, the environment minister said it was reasonable to spend half a million dollars on luxury accommodations in Brazil on a junket. With all the extravagant spending, will the Prime Minister stop dodging and tell Canadians the truth? Are we in a recession or merely a technical recession?”
Statement grade
C+
68 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 76%Positioning 13%Procedure 5%The ask 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 33 wordsthe Conservative Party leader needs to explain the $8.8 million of unaccounted for, unexplained expenses.1Off point The Conservatives know that we are in the middle of a trade war, 3but we have a plan.Vague promise Positioning · 3 wordsWe are building.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 5 wordsLet me give some examples.Procedure Claims · 45 wordsThere is Canada’s first European LNG agreement, with more than $30 billion in investment secured.2 The Nouveau Monde Graphite mine project will provide thousands of jobs in the skilled trades. The Darlington nuclear project in Ontario will provide thousands of jobs in the skilled trades. Positioning · 10 wordsWe are building this country. We are fighting for Canadians.PositioningVague promise The ask · 6 wordsI hope the Conservatives join us.Partly on point

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