“Mr. Speaker, there is a growing scourge in our society, namely the use of the Internet to access violent material or material that sexually exploits children. This is a very serious matter and I would like to ask my colleague, the parliamentary secretary, a question. What solutions does Bill C‑16 propose, particularly in terms of what is required of Internet service providers, to stamp out this scourge and protect our young people once and for all?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 32 wordsin fact, what this does is basically give tools.The objective of Bill C‑16 is to protect victims.1It gives tools to police enforcement and those who work in the justice realm, Reasoning · 10 wordsso that they will be able to catch predators faster.Claims · 16 wordsIt imposes on service providers to share the information.2Bill C‑16 will be a helpful remedy.
