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Tom Osborne

95 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Pat Kelly (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, last Friday, we learned that under the Liberal Prime Minister, Canada is the only G20 country in a recession. Yesterday, we learned that there is only a 1% chance that their latest fiscal anchor will hold. The Liberals have, so far, refused to acknowledge their own government’s reports. Will they admit today that they caused the only recession in the G20 and that they are already breaking their latest fiscal anchor, or are they going to say that it is all just a technicality?”
Statement grade
C–
57 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 37%Claims 27%Reasoning 13%The ask 23%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 35 wordswhen Conservatives vote against affordability measures and then complain about affordability, Canadians see that as disingenuous.1 What is also disingenuous is when they talk down the Canadian economy while we are trying to find solutions.PositioningOff point Claims · 7 wordsThe U.S. is Canada’s largest trading partner.2 Reasoning · 12 wordsIt only stands to reason that we would have the largest impact. Claims · 19 wordsWe are building Canadian infrastructure using Canadian labour and Canadian materials.Vague promise We are building trade corridors with other countries.Partly on pointVague promise The ask · 22 wordsI ask the other party to join us in believing in Canada, in believing in Canadians and in believing in building Canada—Off point

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