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Ginette Lavack

97 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Joël Godin (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, it is unfortunate to hear what we just heard. It is rather pathetic to be rejoicing about the fact that the government has to give Canadians money so that they can afford to eat. Canada is the only G20 country that is in a recession. The Liberals have a long list of excuses. Meanwhile, seniors are being forced to cut back on groceries. Families are being forced to make big sacrifices to make ends meet. The Liberals need to admit that what they are doing is not working. They need to quickly find solutions to stop this decline. That said, they need to start by admitting that we are in recession.”
Statement grade
D+
50 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 32%Claims 65%Procedure 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 31 wordsI must admit that, given the challenges we are currently facing, there is a tremendous amount of work to do.Partly on point We, on this side of the House, are doing that work.PositioningVague promise Claims · 63 wordsWe are investing in Canadians and in businesses.Vague promise I was very proud to visit the Manitoba Chambers of Commerce, 1where business owners told us that we are on the right track and asked us to continue making these investments, because they support them.Off point We also want to create up to 100,000 jobs in the skilled trades to support all sectors of our industry.2Partly on point Procedure · 3 wordsThat is important.Procedure

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