“Madam Speaker, here are the facts: There were 25,000 net jobs lost this year, and productivity, business capital investment and GDP are down. Today’s numbers show that wage growth is down, with Canadian workers taking home less. If this is the Prime Minister’s idea of a strong economy, what would a weak economy look like?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 77 / 100
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Claims 55%Positioning 45%
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Madam Speaker, Claims · 21 wordswhat has happened in the last year is that our largest trading partner has put in unfair tariffs against this country.1Positioning · 9 wordsThe Conservatives try to pretend that did not happen.PositioningClaims · 10 wordsThe largest impact would be on the largest trading partner, Positioning · 10 wordsbut we have planted the seeds of a stronger economy.PositioningVague promiseClaims · 21 wordsWe are building Canada strong and building more infrastructure in Canada using Canadian materials and Canadian labour, with more trading partners.Positioning · 24 wordsLet us allow those seeds to bear fruit.Partly on pointInstead of talking down the Canadian economy, the Conservatives should join us in building Canada strong.PositioningOff point