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Yves Perron

147 words · 12 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Claude DeBellefeuille (Bloc Québécois)
“Madam Speaker, it is always interesting to listen to my colleague, the Bloc Québécois whip. I would like my colleague to talk to us about the diversity of social housing in Quebec. There are housing co-operatives and non-profit organizations that manage social housing buildings for people with disabilities or seniors. There is also social housing or low-income housing for seniors. I understand that other provinces do not have as much diversity. This diversity is Quebec’s strength. I would like my colleague to tell us about one of Quebec’s demands. Quebec would like to see funds set aside to allow alternative housing networks to flourish. When I think of Build Canada Homes, I tend to think that we are talking about housing in partnership with private entities, which might exclude community organizations, for example.”
Statement grade
B–
72 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 33%Claims 24%Positioning 12%The ask 11%Promise 7%Aside 7%Reasoning 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 43 wordsI want to thank my “original whip”. Today is the first time I have called her by her nickname in public. I want to thank her for her thoughtful question and the wise counsel that she kindly gives me on a regular basis.Thanks Claims · 16 wordsShe is right to talk about Quebec’s uniqueness, its specificity and the diversity of its models. Positioning · 10 wordsWe would like to see more respect for those things.Positioning Claims · 19 wordsWe do not understand why it takes two or four years to reach an agreement. That is the problem. Positioning · 7 wordsThe federal government needs to understand that.Positioning The ask · 3 wordsWe need flexibility. Promise · 11 wordsI am going to make a constructive proposal to the government, Vague promiseAside · 10 wordsand I hope that the parliamentary secretary is taking notes.Aside The ask · 13 wordsThe difference between the 22% and the 16.6% could be transferred to Quebec. Reasoning · 9 wordsThat way, we could take care of our diversity, Thanks · 6 wordsas my colleague explained so well.Thanks

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