Analysis · Debate reply · beta

Jean-Denis Garon

219 words · 17 sentences · 19 clauses

Replying to Tamara Jansen (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, Canadians did not need a Parliamentary Budget Officer report to tell them that the economy was in trouble; families knew it when their groceries kept getting more expensive, when their mortgage payments doubled and when young people gave up on owning their own home. For years we have been sounding the alarms, yet the Liberals kept telling us, “Everything is fine.” Now, the PBO confirms that we have a bigger deficit, weaker growth, lower wages and only a 1% chance of meeting the government’s own fiscal anchor. Why does my colleague think it took the Liberal government so long to admit what Canadians already knew, and why are they still refusing to change the costly policies that are making life less affordable?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 9%Claims 52%Reasoning 26%Positioning 11%Aside 1%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Procedure · 19 wordsthe devil is in the details. We need to look at the numbers and break them down a little.Procedure Claims · 15 wordsDuring question period, the Prime Minister stated that average wages have risen faster than inflation.1 Reasoning · 14 wordsHowever, we need to look at the people at the bottom of the ladder. Claims · 76 wordsBeing rich in Canada today is not an issue.Partly on point They can still afford to buy big cars. They can even afford to pay $2 a litre for gas.2 They can still go to restaurants.Off point The problem is that things are stagnating for the 20% to 25% of people who live from paycheque to paycheque.3 Those people have not seen an increase in their purchasing power. This government has been in power for 10 or 11 years.4 Positioning · 25 wordsWe all agree that the previous prime minister was not much of an economics guy.Unearned certainty Even his finance minister ran away, 5which says a lot.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 13 wordsThis government keeps doling out benefits and new cheques without acknowledging the problem. Reasoning · 44 wordsIt is fine to help people in times of crisis, but when we see that 20% of the people in this country are getting poorer and losing purchasing power and the government simply hands them a cheque, that is hardly a vision for society. Claims · 10 wordsIt is just making people lose faith in our institutions. Aside · 3 wordsThat worries me.AsidePartly on point

Analysed on