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Jake Sawatzky

172 words · 11 sentences · 11 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 21 wordsI rise today to commemorate the life of UBC student Kai Smart, whom I worked with on fundraising for mental health.2Procedure Claims · 147 wordsOn March 20, at the age of 23, Kai tragically lost his life in an avalanche in Japan.1 I would like to share some words written by Kai’s parents, John and Julia, who said Kai was a mountain man, an explorer of the world and a lover of people from all walks of life.3 He was an avid skier and adventurer. In his short life, he experienced more than many do in a lifetime. What stood out about Kai was how he moved through the world. He connected with people across borders, languages and cultures. He carried curiosity, courage, kindness and humility wherever he went, making others feel welcome, inspired and more alive. “Live like Kai” has emerged as a mantra in the mountain community he called home. In his memory, the Smart family is establishing a memorial fund to support young people making a positive impact.4 Thanks · 4 wordsRest in peace, Kai.Thanks

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