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Arielle Kayabaga

155 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 70 wordsthis past weekend I joined members of our London community for the annual remembering “our London family” vigil and march, marking the fifth anniversary of the terrorist attack that took the lives of Salman, Madiha, Yumnah and Talat Afzaal because they were Muslim.12 I also had the privilege of spending time with members of the Afzaal family, whose courage and resilience continue to inspire all of us across our city. Thanks · 43 wordsI would like to thank the Youth Coalition Combating Islamophobia for organizing this important commemoration and for its continued advocacy to build a more inclusive and compassionate world. I also want to thank my colleagues who joined me in London for this event.Thanks The ask · 35 wordsAs we reflect on the legacy of the Afzaal family, let us recommit ourselves to confronting Islamophobia, rejecting hatred in all its forms and building a Canada where everyone can live safely and with dignity.Vague promise Positioning · 7 wordsThe Afzaal family will never be forgotten.Positioning

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