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Peter Schiefke

164 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 117 wordswhen the craft safely returned to earth on April 10, an exciting new chapter began in space exploration.1 For the first time in over 50 years, humans left Earth’s orbit and journeyed toward the moon, on the Artemis II mission, a mission that marked not only a major milestone in science and space exploration but also a proud moment for Canada.2 As the first Canadian to participate in a lunar mission, Colonel Jeremy Hansen joins the ranks of great explorers who have pushed the boundaries of what is possible.3 He and his fellow astronauts demonstrated the courage, dedication and excellence that define humanity’s greatest achievements. For Canadians, Colonel Hansen’s example is a source of pride and inspiration. Thanks · 47 wordsOn behalf of my community, Vaudreuil, all members of the House, and all Canadians, I would like to congratulate Colonel Hansen and the entire Artemis II crew on their historic mission. I thank them for inspiring a new generation to push the boundaries of what is possible.Thanks

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