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Carol Anstey

94 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Sherry Romanado (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I had a chance to visit the hon. member’s riding a couple of years ago. It is a beautiful riding with phenomenal people. I was listening to her speech quite intently. She mentioned something that I think we can all agree with. No one wants young people to have to leave their home to find work. I think that all of us want to make sure that young people who want to stay in their home province, find a good job and be able to settle and have a family have that opportunity. With that, I know that we recently brought forward the team Canada strong plan in the spring economic statement, which will allow for apprenticeship training and some opportunities to allow young people to get the skill set they need to help build the homes that the member is referring to. Would she agree that this could be a good initiative in terms of helping young people stay in their home province?”
Statement grade
A+
Average 96 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 11%Reasoning 62%Claims 28%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 10 wordsI thank the member opposite for visiting my beautiful province.Thanks Reasoning · 42 wordsMy response is that if we do not have an economy that has opportunity for our tradespeople, we can train them all we want, but they are not going to stay in the province if they do not have those good-paying jobs. Claims · 26 wordsWe have an offshore oil and gas sector that has watched investment completely flee the province, with a 40% reduction in investment over the last decade.1 Reasoning · 16 wordsThis is an example of how we are failing the young people in Newfoundland and Labrador.

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