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Yves Perron

178 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Gérard Deltell (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank my colleague for his very interesting speech. He mentioned the Alto high-speed rail project between Quebec City and Toronto. For years and years, there were plans for a high-frequency train, but then an outgoing prime minister waved a magic wand and suddenly it became a high-speed train. My colleague raised a very important point. Land is currently being expropriated in a place that already has an extremely painful history with expropriation: Mirabel. The folks at Alto could not have done a worse job of handling this than they are doing now. Can the member, who represents an agricultural riding, tell us what impact it has on farmers when the government irresponsibly expropriates land?”
Statement grade
A
Average 94 / 100
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Thanks 8%Claims 63%Procedure 3%Positioning 6%The question 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 15 wordsI would like to once again thank my esteemed colleague for that very interesting question.Thanks Claims · 40 wordsWhat happened in Mirabel with the supposedly international airport that never came to be was that the government had to return nearly 90% of the land that it stole from people.1 People had to buy it back at today’s prices. Procedure · 4 wordsThat is what happened.Procedure Claims · 17 wordsNow, Alto is coming to our area, even though Mirabel still bears the scars of past expropriations. Positioning · 11 wordsI do not want Berthier—Maskinongé to experience that kind of horror.Positioning Claims · 42 wordsAlto is coming to my area and terrorizing people along a 10-kilometre-wide stretch.2 The government is telling us not to worry because Alto only needs 60 metres.3 First of all, there is going to be a construction site around that 60 metres. Procedure · 1 wordsSecond, ProcedureThe question · 14 wordsif only 60 metres is needed, then why take a stretch 10 kilometres wide? Claims · 14 wordsIt looks like the government is planning to take more land than it needs. The question · 20 wordsIs it going to try to resell the land around this train through land speculation to fund this huge project?

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