“Madam Speaker, it is always a pleasure to rise on behalf of the people from Kamloops—Thompson—Nicola. Those watching at home may not realize this, but MPs have a mechanism by which we can contact one another directly. I sent the minister three emails directly. Candidly, I have sent notes to other ministers and they respond typically within 12 to 24 hours. It shows respect among ministers and members of Parliament to do that. Not once has he responded. What kind of example is the minister setting, as a minister of the Crown, when he cannot even respond to notes from another member of Parliament?”
Statement grade
C
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 66. The grade is held to 61, 30 above Signal.
61 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 47%Positioning 19%Claims 18%Promise 16%
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Madam Speaker, Aside · 46 wordsI would ask the member to walk across the floor.I would be happy for him to come over and talk.We are here in Ottawa all the time.If he wants to be more bureaucratic and send emails, there is that, but I am here.AsidePositioning · 18 wordsI am here to talk about this.We are here to get housing built.Vague promiseThat is the goal.PositioningClaims · 17 wordsI have certainly been approached and had conversations with many members on both sides of the House.Partly on pointPromise · 16 wordsI am certainly willing to focus on getting housing built in all the communities across Canada.Vague promise