“Mr. Speaker, apparently they do not believe in their Prime Minister’s ability to answer questions and defend his own economic record. We believe Canadians could do a lot of things, too, if the government would just get out of the way. Unfortunately, the Office of the Superintendent of Bankruptcy found new evidence that the Liberal recession, the only recession in the G20, is affecting Canadians. There has been an 8% increase in consumer insolvencies and a 10% increase in bankruptcies. This Liberal government’s policies are forcing Canadians into bankruptcy. Will the Liberals reverse the costly deficit policies that caused this recession?”
Statement grade
C
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Average 64 / 100
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Aside 29%Claims 37%Positioning 34%
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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 22 wordsI know it is Tuesday and the Leader of the Opposition is looking for some good news.I have some for him.AsidePartly on pointClaims · 28 wordsAs the Prime Minister announced, the Canadian economy created over 80,000 jobs.1We have the second-fastest growth in the G7 and we are attracting record investments in Canada.2Positioning · 26 wordsWe believe in Canadian workers and Canadian industry.We believe in a prosperous Canada, and every day is a good day to fight for Canadian workers.PositioningOff pointVague promise
