“Mr. Speaker, my colleague and good friend has a strong knowledge in this space. I was wondering if she could explain why continuing to build bureaucracy does not actually build homes, and what she sees in her home province of Newfoundland and Labrador.”
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 17 wordsI want to thank my friend, who has strong ties to Newfoundland and Labrador, for that question.ThanksReasoning · 67 wordsWhen we build out government bureaucracy, we build out the size of government and we increase government spending, which drives up inflation, which drives up the cost of everything, including the cost of homebuilding.That is not the answer.We want to unleash the private sector to be able to reduce those costs, Vague promiseso that we can spur on home construction.This would make a meaningful difference.Vague promiseClaims · 12 wordsAs I said, in rural Canada, home ownership levels are very high.1Positioning · 13 wordsThey never want to talk about what the pressure is on social housing, PositioningClaims · 24 wordsbut it is that we are driving affordability out of reach and putting more people into a situation where they cannot afford home ownership.Promise · 7 wordsThat is what we want to correct.Partly on pointVague promise