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Andréanne Larouche

242 words · 17 sentences · 21 clauses

Replying to Marie-Hélène Gaudreau (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I am deeply moved by the remarks made by my colleague from Shefford. We are talking about taking back control of our lives. Just a few hours ago, during the debate on Bill C-20, we were talking about building Canada. I asked the following question: How could a program be implemented to the point of jeopardizing or suspending the activities of organizations that help abused women, even as they were in the process of setting up shelters for them? When my colleague says that the government must absolutely work in a way that is consistent with Quebec, I would like to know if there are, in fact, concrete steps that can be taken.”
Statement grade
B–
71 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 2%Claims 78%Positioning 7%Promise 5%Reasoning 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordsthe member is right: ProcedureClaims · 144 wordsRepresentatives from those Quebec organizations did indeed come to testify about shelters.1 What we are seeing at this point in time is that wait lists keep getting longer. When I say that waving a magic wand will not fix things, Build Canada Homes is a prime example of that. We do not really know what it will amount to; it is still very unclear. We have a lot of questions. One thing we know for sure is that wait lists are getting longer.Unearned certainty More and more women are turning to emergency resources. Without a space in a second-stage shelter, they are stuck at the emergency shelter stage, meaning that other women who need emergency resources cannot get them, so they stay home and cannot access emergency resources. Other women who are ready for that second stage cannot access it because there is no space. Positioning · 13 wordsAfter second-stage housing, where do these women go and what do they do?Positioning Claims · 5 wordsOften, they have their families. Promise · 13 wordsWe want to ensure that these people are housed safely and with dignity.Vague promise Claims · 17 wordsSometimes they need supportive housing to ensure follow up. In short, all the steps are being delayed. Reasoning · 19 wordsThis is a key issue because it is often the reason why a woman feels she cannot get out. Claims · 22 wordsShe feels that she is stuck in a cycle of violence because she does not know where to go with her children. Positioning · 5 wordsIt is a huge concern.PositioningPartly on point

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