Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Thanks 74%Claims 18%The ask 8%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 123 wordsthe Older, Bolder, Better event, Alberta’s largest Seniors’ Week event, was recently hosted by the WE Seniors at my home of Enoch Cree Nation’s River Cree Resort.1I am proud that the Westend Seniors Activity Centre, which is the gathering place for thousands of Edmonton seniors, is located in my community of Edmonton Northwest.2Congratulations to the CEO, Dr. Haidong Liang, and his whole team for their hard work in welcoming over 1,200 elders and over 120 vendors specializing in serving the silver economy.3As the local member of Parliament, I had the honour of being the keynote speaker, 4and I was proud to take our Conservative Party of Canada’s message back to Edmonton that an empowered Alberta belongs in a united Canada.ThanksClaims · 30 wordsI encourage all Albertans to remember the sacrifices that our parents, our grandmothers, our grandfathers and our ancestors made to build our province in our country that we call home.The ask · 14 wordsIn their honour, take action to keep Alberta in a united Canada this fall.