“Mr. Speaker, let us separate the fiction and actually have some reality here. Most of our troops are not seeing a bump in their paycheque because the Liberals continue to claw it back at every opportunity. Rents are up by more than 5% for military housing. Housing support is down in more than 10 of the major housing posting locations. These reckless cuts are making retention and readiness much worse. How can our brave women and men who serve in the Canadian Armed Forces trust these Liberals when they give with one hand and claw back with the other? Will the defence minister reverse these bad policies and actually start improving the retention of our brave women and men?”
Statement grade
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 69. The grade is held to 57, 30 above Relevance.
57 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsit is a good day to answer this question, ProcedureClaims · 39 wordsbecause, in fact, a year ago today we announced that we would achieve 2% of our GDP expenditures for defence.1Partly on pointI remember where the member was at the end of the Harper regime when it was less than 1%.2Positioning · 24 wordsI did not see him fighting then for the money that we needed for our forces.In fact, he has been missing in action.PositioningOff pointClaims · 25 wordsOn the housing front alone, we are building 7,500 new units, 800 units are under construction now and three new apartment buildings have been purchased.3Positioning · 7 wordsWe are making progress step by step.PositioningVague promiseReasoning · 12 wordsThat is exactly what the women and men of the forces deserve.Partly on point