“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals’ pay raise for the women and men of the Canadian Armed Forces is a farce. The Liberals are slashing the housing benefit by up to 72%, while upping the rent by 5%. CAF members in the national capital region will see their housing differential cut by up to $4,200 a year. In Kingston, they will see their housing differential cut by up to $7,200 a year. When will the defence minister reverse these harmful changes?”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 66. The grade is held to 65, 30 above Relevance.
65 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Promise 17%Claims 60%Positioning 23%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Promise · 17 wordswe are going to continue to make thoughtful, systematic and disciplined investments in the Canadian Armed Forces.Vague promiseClaims · 59 wordsApplications are up 61% year over year.1The number of folks brought into the system is up 13% year over year.2We have more women joining.Partly on pointWe are making progress on the cultural challenges inside the Canadian Armed Forces.Vague promiseWe are buying weapons systems.We bought new rifles.3Off pointWe are building new homes.Partly on pointWe are building for the future.Vague promisePositioning · 23 wordsWhen a mess is left like it was by the last regime under Mr. Harper, it is kind of hard to defend it.PositioningOff point