Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Brad Redekopp

174 words · 10 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
B+
83 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 39%Claims 59%Procedure 2%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordsafter a decade of Liberal mismanagement, Canadians are paying the price.Positioning Claims · 13 wordsUnder the Liberals, Canada is now the only G20 country in a recession, 1Positioning · 9 wordsand families are feeling it at the kitchen table.Positioning Procedure · 4 wordsDo members want proof?Procedure Claims · 57 wordsA recent United Way poll shows that 38% are struggling with food insecurity, with one in five saying that all the food in their home was eaten with no money left over to buy more; 240% are losing sleep over how to stretch their paycheque just to afford groceries; 3and 22% of Canadians are experiencing poverty themselves.4 Positioning · 17 wordsDo members know who is not going hungry? It is our jet-setting Prime Minister; that it who.Positioning Claims · 33 wordsIn just one year as Prime Minister, he spent almost a million taxpayer dollars on food for his private jet.5 That is enough money to feed 55 Canadian families for a full year.6 Positioning · 30 wordsRegular Canadians are barely scraping by. While the Prime Minister eats five-star meals on his private jet, his Liberal recession is causing financial insecurity, stress and hunger for everyone else.Positioning

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