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François-Philippe Champagne

80 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Joël Godin (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, that is another meaningless answer. It is lost. The Liberals think they have control of everything, but they should be serving the people instead of using them. After 11 years of this Liberal government and the passage of Bill C-83 in 2019, we are seeing the consequences in our prisons: increased violence, staff shortages, repeated inmate-on-inmate assaults and multiple murders. Donnacona’s correctional officers have called for concrete tools. When will the Liberal government fix its mistakes and restore safety in our prisons?”
Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 59%Promise 41%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 47 wordsmy colleague will be pleased to learn that we are, in fact, working hand in hand with the Government of Quebec on these issues.2Vague promise My colleague should know that we conducted a pilot project to remove cell phones from the various prisons and penitentiaries across the country.1 Promise · 33 wordsWe will always be there to ensure the safety of correctional officers.Vague promise We will continue to work with the Government of Quebec.Vague promise We will continue to fight extortion and crime in this country.Partly on pointVague promise

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