Analysis · Question Period answer · beta

François-Philippe Champagne

85 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Tamara Jansen (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals want to make it easier to hide information from Canadians by no longer allowing government emails or text messages to be part of an information request. Even the independent Information Commissioner is opposed. Will the President of the Treasury Board reverse this proposal and defend Canadians’ right to know? Some hon. members: Oh, oh!”
Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 28%Procedure 6%Claims 51%Positioning 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 24 wordsI have never seen so much excitement from the Conservatives for an answer. We can see that summer is coming. They are awakening now.Aside Procedure · 5 wordsThe question is very serious, ProcedureClaims · 28 wordsand I can assure members of the House and all Canadians watching that we have some of the strongest laws when it comes to government information and disclosure. Positioning · 13 wordsWe believe in an open government. We believe in providing information to Canadians.Positioning Claims · 15 wordsCanadians can be assured that we have some of the strongest laws in the G7.Partly on point

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