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Mona Fortier

62 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Arnold Viersen (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, one of those really great laws is Bill S-211, which requires companies selling or distributing goods in Canada to produce an annual report. The Liberals, contrary to the law, revised their directive and exempted a bunch of their corporate buddies from having to file the report. Now the U.S. is investigating Canada for not fighting forced labour and is threatening us in the CUSMA talks. Why is the government putting the CUSMA talks in jeopardy so that it can pad the pockets of its corporate buddies instead of fighting slavery?”
Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 6%Claims 47%Promise 47%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordslet me be clear.Procedure Claims · 29 wordsCanada and the United States share the goal of keeping goods produced through forced labour out of our supply chains. Canada, right now, already has strong protections in place. Promise · 29 wordsWe will take further action to strengthen them through new legislation.Vague promise We will continue working closely with our partners to uphold high labour standards and ensure fair, rules-based trade.Partly on pointVague promise

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