Greeting 1% Positioning 14% Thanks 5% Procedure 1% Claims 68% The ask 2% Reasoning 5% Promise 4%
Structure · 19 steps
Claims · 12
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 14 words it is an honour to rise today as the elected representative for Kamloops—Shuswap—Central Rockies. Greeting Positioning · 132 words As I have previously stated in this place, all of us have a solemn responsibility to provide representation and voice to those citizens who voted for us and depend on us to be their voice here in Parliament. Canadians need us to be vigilant, and they depend on us to be their voice. We have to be ready for the challenges and dangers that emerge, and I accept that responsibility with sincere dedication to the amazing people of Kamloops—Shuswap—Central Rockies and the people of Canada. We must all take actions to prevent, mitigate and overcome challenges and dangers, including the the unintended consequences caused by the actions or the inactions of levels of government. In these times of global uncertainty, Canadians need our vigilance and actions more than at any other time. Positioning Off point Thanks · 55 words As I begin speaking to this bill, Bill C-25, the strong and free elections act, I would like to thank all of the Elections Canada workers, from the electoral district returning officers to the poll workers, the volunteers and the ever-important scrutineers who are such an important part of our democratic system here in Canada. Thanks Procedure · 10 words I will speak to components of this bill, Bill C-25, Procedure Claims · 53 words and how parts of it are overdue while other parts need further debate and consideration for what is best for Canada and Canadians’ interests. After the 2021 federal election, Canadians were alarmed to hear of foreign interference in the election of candidates and members sent here to represent and defend this country’s interests.6 Positioning · 7 words The Liberals say they care about democracy, Positioning Claims · 93 words yet they have allowed foreign actors to brazenly interfere in our elections. It was only after the Liberals got caught turning a blind eye to Beijing’s interference that they finally introduced legislation to establish a foreign influence registry in Canada. However, two years after passing that bill into law, there is still no registry.7 So far, we have had date after date promised and date after date missed. After years of opposing a foreign influence registry, including Conservative efforts to create one, the Liberals’ latest tactic appears to be one of endless delay. The ask · 24 words It is time for the Liberal government to finally take foreign interference seriously. It is time to get a registry up and running, today. Claims · 292 words I must say that this is uncannily similar to an issue dealt with in my role as associate shadow minister for fisheries, and that is the issue of foreign ownership of licences and quota on the west coast. The last Conservative government put in motion policies to stop the issue of controlling agreements between processors and harvesters on the east coast, 8 where processors were limiting harvesters’ choice of where they landed their catch and how much they received for their catch. In the following years, legislation and regulations were put in place to end those controlling agreements and protect local fish harvesters and their communities on the east coast.9 In May 2019, the Standing Committee on Fisheries and Oceans tabled a report titled “West Coast Fisheries: 4 Sharing Risks and Benefits”. In that report, there were 20 recommendations to government that would have helped meet the aspirations of fish harvesters, especially young fishers, to carry on their careers and family traditions and contribute to building economically, socially and culturally vibrant west coast communities.10 In 2023, four years later, that same fisheries committee undertook another study to produce yet another report, titled “Foreign Ownership and Corporate Concentration of Fishing Licences and Quota”.5 The testimony we heard during that second report was alarming in that after four years, the government had taken almost no action to identify who the beneficial owners of licences and quota are on the west coast. In fact, what we basically heard was that it has no idea. It is now seven years since that first report on the issue was tabled in the House, 11 and the Liberal government has yet to address the issue and put in place any significant measures to protect our independent harvesters on the west coast. Logical leap Reasoning · 18 words That is why I say that Bill C-25 and the west coast fisheries issues have something in common. Positioning · 5 words It is delay, delay, delay. Positioning Claims · 25 words If the Liberals do not find it important enough to create a foreign influence registry or to investigate whether foreign entities own licences and quotas, Promise · 15 words and who controls, catches and processes our Canadian seafood, then Conservatives will hold them accountable, Vague promise Positioning · 12 words and we hope that Canadians will expect that accountability from their government. Positioning Off point Claims · 242 words Another component of the bill that I want Canadians to be aware of is the third party financing loophole. Bill C-25 would create a wide open loophole through which foreign money could still be used by third parties for partisan activity, partisan advertising and election surveying. Specifically, if contributions to a third party amount to 10% or less of its annual revenue in the year prior to a fixed election year, it could use its own funds to pay for, among other things, partisan activity and advertising.2 A third party’s own funds do not have to come from Canadian citizens or permanent residents and do not have to be reported in the same way.3 With fixed election periods, it is very easy for third parties and foreign interests to predict when an election may be.12 A foreign interest could funnel money into a third party for two or three years ahead of schedule, which would then be treated as part of the third party’s own funds. Further, 10% sounds like a small number, but it may not be. There are third parties that have a lot of money. What constitutes 10% or less of a third party’s revenue coming from contributions may in fact be millions of dollars. This means that very large third parties would be able to use their own funds for election-related expenses. Disappointingly, the Liberals voted against our amendments to close these wide open loopholes in the bill.1 Reasoning · 33 words I raise these points as part of this debate because that is what we as elected representatives are sent here to do, to scrutinize legislation and make it the best it can be. Claims · 22 words What we have seen from the government since I first came here in 2015 is not the best legislation it could be. Partly on point Promise · 25 words Conservatives will continue to call on the Liberal government to strengthen Canada’s position against foreign actors who seek to influence our economies and our democracy. Vague promise
At a glance
Lost points for Off point ×25 Positioning ×10 Vague promise ×2 Greeting Thanks Procedure Logical leap Partly on point
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What the tags mean →
Signal · 73
13 of 42 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Greeting Greetings and pleasantries. What the tags mean → “it is an honour to rise today as the elected representative for Kamloops—Shuswap—Central Rockies.” A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “As I have previously stated in this place, all of us have a solemn responsibility to provide representation and voice to those citizens who voted for us and depend on us to be their voice here in Parliament.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Canadians need us to be vigilant,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and they depend on us to be their voice.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “We have to be ready for the challenges and dangers that emerge,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and I accept that responsibility with sincere dedication to the amazing people of Kamloops—Shuswap—Central Rockies and the people of Canada.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “We must all take actions to prevent, mitigate and overcome challenges and dangers, including the the unintended consequences caused by the actions or the inactions of levels of government.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “In these times of global uncertainty, Canadians need our vigilance and actions more than at any other time.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “As I begin speaking to this bill, Bill C-25, the strong and free elections act, I would like to thank all of the Elections Canada workers, from the electoral district returning officers to the poll workers, the volunteers and the ever-important scrutineers who are such an important part of our democratic system here in Canada.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “I will speak to components of this bill, Bill C-25,” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “The Liberals say they care about democracy,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “It is delay, delay, delay.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and we hope that Canadians will expect that accountability from their government.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · 45
26 of 42 deductions are Relevance
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “As I have previously stated in this place, all of us have a solemn responsibility to provide representation and voice to those citizens who voted for us and depend on us to be their voice here in Parliament.” General remarks about representing constituents, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Canadians need us to be vigilant,” General call for vigilance, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and they depend on us to be their voice.” General remark about representing Canadians, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “We have to be ready for the challenges and dangers that emerge,” General remark about challenges and dangers, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and I accept that responsibility with sincere dedication to the amazing people of Kamloops—Shuswap—Central Rockies and the people of Canada.” Personal acceptance of responsibility, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “We must all take actions to prevent, mitigate and overcome challenges and dangers, including the the unintended consequences caused by the actions or the inactions of levels of government.” General remark about government actions, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “In these times of global uncertainty, Canadians need our vigilance and actions more than at any other time.” General remark about global uncertainty, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “I must say that this is uncannily similar to an issue dealt with in my role as associate shadow minister for fisheries,” Introduces the member’s fisheries role, a different subject.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and that is the issue of foreign ownership of licences and quota on the west coast.” About foreign ownership of fishing licences, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “The last Conservative government put in motion policies to stop the issue of controlling agreements between processors and harvesters on the east coast,” Past fisheries policies on the east coast, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “where processors were limiting harvesters’ choice of where they landed their catch and how much they received for their catch.” Fisheries landing and pricing practices, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “In the following years, legislation and regulations were put in place to end those controlling agreements and protect local fish harvesters and their communities on the east coast.” Past fisheries legislation on the east coast, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “In May 2019, the Standing Committee on Fisheries and Oceans tabled a report titled “West Coast Fisheries:” A fisheries committee report, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Sharing Risks and Benefits”.” The title of a fisheries committee report, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “In that report, there were 20 recommendations to government that would have helped meet the aspirations of fish harvesters, especially young fishers, to carry on their careers and family traditions and contribute to building economically, socially and culturally vibrant west coast communities.” Recommendations to government on fisheries, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “In 2023, four years later, that same fisheries committee undertook another study to produce yet another report, titled “Foreign Ownership and Corporate Concentration of Fishing Licences and Quota”.” A second fisheries committee study, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “The testimony we heard during that second report was alarming in that after four years, the government had taken almost no action to identify who the beneficial owners of licences and quota are on the west coast.” Testimony about fisheries licence ownership, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “In fact, what we basically heard was that it has no idea.” The government’s knowledge of fisheries licence owners, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “It is now seven years since that first report on the issue was tabled in the House,” Time elapsed since a fisheries report, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and the Liberal government has yet to address the issue and put in place any significant measures to protect our independent harvesters on the west coast.” The government’s inaction on west coast fisheries, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “That is why I say that Bill C-25 and the west coast fisheries issues have something in common.” Draws an analogy between the bill and fisheries issues, but the fisheries subject itself is outside the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “It is delay, delay, delay.” A slogan about delay tied to the fisheries analogy, not the bill’s provisions.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “If the Liberals do not find it important enough to create a foreign influence registry or to investigate whether foreign entities own licences and quotas,” Combines the registry with fisheries ownership questions, but its substance is the fisheries subject outside the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and who controls, catches and processes our Canadian seafood, then Conservatives will hold them accountable,” Accountability on fisheries and registry matters framed around the fisheries subject, not the bill’s provisions.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and we hope that Canadians will expect that accountability from their government.” A general appeal about accountability, continuing the fisheries analogy rather than the bill.
Partly on point Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about. What the tags mean → “What we have seen from the government since I first came here in 2015 is not the best legislation it could be.” A general judgment on the government’s legislation since 2015, not this bill’s provisions.
Reasoning · 93
1 of 42 deductions are Reasoning
Reasoning checks for sound logic and solid support for any conclusion. A low score means the speaker made unsupported leaps or used weak arguments.
Logical leap A conclusion that does not follow from the reasons given for it. What the tags mean → “and the Liberal government has yet to address the issue and put in place any significant measures to protect our independent harvesters on the west coast.” The registry delay and the fisheries inaction are two examples offered to support a claim about all legislation since 2015, a step from a small sample to a general verdict.
Conclusions found · 7
Conclusion “It is time for the Liberal government to finally take foreign interference seriously.”
Because “However, two years after passing that bill into law, there is still no registry.”
“So far, we have had date after date promised and date after date missed.”
Conclusion “It is time to get a registry up and running, today.”
Because “However, two years after passing that bill into law, there is still no registry.”
“So far, we have had date after date promised and date after date missed.”
Conclusion “That is why I say that Bill C-25 and the west coast fisheries issues have something in common.”
Because “However, two years after passing that bill into law, there is still no registry.”
“So far, we have had date after date promised and date after date missed.”
“The testimony we heard during that second report was alarming in that after four years, the government had taken almost no action to identify who the beneficial owners of licences and quota are on the west coast.”
“and the Liberal government has yet to address the issue and put in place any significant measures to protect our independent harvesters on the west coast.”
Conclusion “and who controls, catches and processes our Canadian seafood, then Conservatives will hold them accountable,”
Because “However, two years after passing that bill into law, there is still no registry.”
“and the Liberal government has yet to address the issue and put in place any significant measures to protect our independent harvesters on the west coast.”
Conclusion “Bill C-25 would create a wide open loophole through which foreign money could still be used by third parties for partisan activity, partisan advertising and election surveying.”
Because “if contributions to a third party amount to 10% or less of its annual revenue in the year prior to a fixed election year, it could use its own funds to pay for, among other things, partisan activity and advertising.”
“A third party’s own funds do not have to come from Canadian citizens or permanent residents and do not have to be reported in the same way.”
“With fixed election periods, it is very easy for third parties and foreign interests to predict when an election may be.”
“A foreign interest could funnel money into a third party for two or three years ahead of schedule,”
“which would then be treated as part of the third party’s own funds.”
Conclusion “What we have seen from the government since I first came here in 2015 is not the best legislation it could be.”
Because “However, two years after passing that bill into law, there is still no registry.”
“So far, we have had date after date promised and date after date missed.”
“The testimony we heard during that second report was alarming in that after four years, the government had taken almost no action to identify who the beneficial owners of licences and quota are on the west coast.”
“and the Liberal government has yet to address the issue and put in place any significant measures to protect our independent harvesters on the west coast.”
Reason flawed The registry delay and the fisheries inaction are two examples offered to support a claim about all legislation since 2015, a step from a small sample to a general verdict.
Conclusion “Conservatives will continue to call on the Liberal government to strengthen Canada’s position against foreign actors who seek to influence our economies and our democracy.”
Because “After the 2021 federal election, Canadians were alarmed to hear of foreign interference in the election of candidates and members sent here to represent and defend this country’s interests.”
“However, two years after passing that bill into law, there is still no registry.”
Respect · 100
0 of 42 deductions are Respect
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Nothing lost points.
Clarity · 95
2 of 42 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Vague promise A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible. What the tags mean → “Conservatives will hold them accountable” A commitment on behalf of his side with no named action, measure, or date for how accountability will happen.
Vague promise A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible. What the tags mean → “will continue to call on the Liberal government” A pledge to keep making appeals without any actor, measure, or success condition attached.
Claims · 12
This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.
1 “the Liberals voted against our amendments to close these wide open loopholes in the bill.” The Liberal government voted against amendments to Bill C-25 designed to close loopholes. search
2 “if contributions to a third party amount to 10% or less of its annual revenue in the year prior to a fixed election year, it could use its own funds to pay for, among other things, partisan activity and advertising.” Bill C-25 allows a third party to use its own funds for partisan activity and advertising if contributions are 10% or less of its prior annual revenue in a fixed election year. search
3 “A third party’s own funds do not have to come from Canadian citizens or permanent residents and do not have to be reported in the same way.” Third party own funds under Bill C-25 do not need to originate from Canadian citizens or permanent residents, nor are they required to be reported in the same manner. search
4 “In May 2019, the Standing Committee on Fisheries and Oceans tabled a report titled “West Coast Fisheries: ” The Standing Committee on Fisheries and Oceans tabled a report titled “West Coast Fisheries: Sharing Risks and Benefits” in May 2019. search
5 “In 2023, four years later, that same fisheries committee undertook another study to produce yet another report, titled “Foreign Ownership and Corporate Concentration of Fishing Licences and Quota”.” In 2023, the Standing Committee on Fisheries and Oceans produced a report titled “Foreign Ownership and Corporate Concentration of Fishing Licences and Quota”. search
6 “After the 2021 federal election, Canadians were alarmed to hear of foreign interference in the election of candidates and members sent here to represent and defend this country’s interests.” Reports of foreign interference in the election of candidates and members appeared after the 2021 federal election. search
7 “two years after passing that bill into law, there is still no registry.” Two years after the bill creating a foreign influence registry was passed into law, the registry was not active. search
8 “The last Conservative government put in motion policies to stop the issue of controlling agreements between processors and harvesters on the east coast,” The last Conservative government initiated policies aimed at stopping controlling agreements between processors and harvesters on the east coast. search
9 “In the following years, legislation and regulations were put in place to end those controlling agreements and protect local fish harvesters and their communities on the east coast.” Legislation and regulations were subsequently established to end controlling agreements and protect local fish harvesters and their communities on the east coast. search
10 “there were 20 recommendations to government” The report “West Coast Fisheries: Sharing Risks and Benefits” contained 20 recommendations to the government. search
11 “It is now seven years since that first report on the issue was tabled in the House,” Seven years have passed since the first report on the west coast fisheries issue was tabled in the House. search
12 “With fixed election periods, it is very easy for third parties and foreign interests to predict when an election may be.” It is easy for third parties and foreign interests to predict election timing during fixed election periods. search