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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI rise today to recognize an extraordinary community leader in Kitchener—Conestoga, Mr. Martin Buhr.ProcedureClaims · 128 wordsFor decades, Martin has worked tirelessly to ensure that people in need have a safe, affordable place to call home.As founding member of MennoHomes, 1which is now known as Beyond Housing, he built a legacy of compassion, inclusion and service that continues to strengthen our community.2This year, as Beyond Housing marks his 25th anniversary and Martin celebrates his 87th birthday, he is preparing for his final Out-Spok’n Bike-a-thon, a community event uniting riders, sponsors and supporters committed to affordable housing.34Over the years, through this ride, Martin has raised more than $387,000, with a goal of reaching $500,000.56Proceeds will support a 30-unit accessible apartment in Elmira.7Martin’s leadership has inspired countless people across Waterloo Region and reminds us about the difference one person can make.Thanks · 20 wordsOn behalf of the grateful community in Kitchener—Conestoga, I thank him and wish him every success in his final ride.ThanksClaims · 6 wordsI will see Mr. Buhr tomorrow.