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Carlos Leitão

88 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Gérard Deltell (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I hope that the member and parliamentary secretary is going to spend the weekend carefully looking over Statistics Canada data, which state that over the past four quarters under the new Prime Minister’s leadership, the results have been negative three times. That is the reality. The reality is also that Canada has the worst inflation in the G7. The reality is also that 2.2 million Canadians have to use food banks to eat. That is the reality. The Prime Minister was elected on the promise that he would be judged on the prices at the grocery store. Does he think of those prices when he invoices $1 million to eat on his airplane?”
Statement grade
C+
65 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 17%Procedure 23%Claims 39%Aside 22%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordsthere is a whole jumble of things in there.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 20 wordsAnyway, let us focus on what I think is the main thing: the statistics. Let us look at the statistics.Procedure Claims · 26 wordsWhat the statistics also say is that Canada’s economy created 88,000 jobs in May, including 150,000 full-time jobs.1 Most of these new jobs were in construction.2Partly on point Aside · 19 wordsI am assuming that if people are being hired to work in construction, the purpose is to build something.Aside Claims · 8 wordsThere are indeed 27,000 new jobs in construction.3 Positioning · 6 wordsThat is where we are headed.PositioningPartly on point

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