“Mr. Speaker, Canada’s hearts are broken at the loss of two of our frontline police officers, two brave individuals who gave their lives protecting our communities. Our frontline officers put themselves in harm’s way every single day to keep us all safe, and this tragedy is being deeply felt across the entire policing community and by all Canadians. Can the Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister of Public Safety speak to the courage and sacrifice of these two officers?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 20 wordsI was heartbroken to learn about Toronto Police Constable Marc Pinizzotto, who was killed in the line of duty yesterday.1Positioning · 9 wordsMy heart is with his family and loved ones.PositioningClaims · 53 wordsWith an 18-year stellar record, Marc was known as someone who was courageous and respected, 2and a man who put others before himself.His death comes only days after OPP Constable Tarun Bali was also killed in the line of duty.3Mr. Bali was known as someone who just wanted to help others.Thanks · 25 wordsTo all our frontline officers, we thank for them work they do each and every day to keep all Canadians safe.We appreciate their service.Thanks