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Jean-Denis Garon

223 words · 15 sentences · 17 clauses

Replying to Gérard Deltell (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to congratulate and thank my colleague from Mirabel for his speech. He began by acknowledging Sylvie D’Amours, who, after three terms as an MNA, will not be running again. I would also like to acknowledge Ms. D’Amours, as well as my provincial colleagues. I would like to acknowledge Éric Caire, who is leaving politics after 19 years, Mario Asselin, who is leaving politics after eight years as an MNA, and Sylvain Lévesque, who is leaving politics after ten years as an MNA. My colleague touched briefly on a point, and I would like him to elaborate on it. He said that Air Canada staff were already prepared to apply certain rules that had not yet been tabled in Parliament, let alone debated or even adopted. Can the member tell us more about this?”
Statement grade
C–
57 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 10%Claims 42%Reasoning 28%The ask 13%The question 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 8 wordsthis is indeed a situation that concerns us.Positioning Claims · 16 wordsA closer look shows that all of this plays right into the hands of the airlines. Reasoning · 18 wordsA commissioner who receives complaints needs to be given the necessary tools to make progress and process complaints. The ask · 30 wordsThe government should not take away or withhold resources from the commissioner, only to finally say that the system is not working and that the work needs to be outsourced. Reasoning · 7 wordsComplaints must be handled with full transparency. Claims · 27 wordsAir passengers are families and individuals who pay to go on vacation and to travel and who are victims of injustice under the law and the regulations. Reasoning · 23 wordsThey have a right to timely compensation, but they also have a right to be assured that the process is fair and transparent. Claims · 11 wordsThat is a far cry from what is in place now. The question · 5 wordsCan such assurance be provided?Partly on point Reasoning · 4 wordsIt might be possible. The question · 9 wordsWould a parliamentary debate have perhaps provided that assurance? Reasoning · 4 wordsThe answer is yes. Claims · 40 wordsHowever, the reality is that by the time the study of Bill C‑30 is complete, there will not be time for us to ask the right questions and get to the bottom of things for the benefit of the public.1Unearned certainty Positioning · 14 wordsToday, we are under a guillotine. The bill will be shoved down Parliament’s throat, PositioningReasoning · 7 wordsand all these questions will remain unanswered.Off point

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