Replying to Marie-Hélène Gaudreau (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, the Department of Natural Resources warned on Thursday that wildfire activity will increase throughout the summer. With hot temperatures expected, 300 mayors are calling on the federal government to abandon its plans for new pipelines, stating in their declaration that more communities are likely to burn to the ground this summer as we double down on fossil fuel expansion. As another wildfire season approaches, will the Liberals finally drop their obsession with oil?”
Statement grade
C–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 70. The grade is held to 59, 30 above Relevance.
59 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 5%Claims 61%Positioning 17%The ask 17%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 5 wordsI will say it again: ProcedureClaims · 63 wordsOur government continues to fight climate change, Vague promiseand we are getting the job done.Vague promiseWe have strengthened methane regulations, 1and we are a global leader in this effort.People are looking to us and asking how they can do the same.When we talk about what we are doing when it comes to climate change and international financing, again, we are a leader.Partly on pointPositioning · 18 wordsHowever, every time we make these changes and do this work, the Bloc Québécois does not support us.2PositioningThe ask · 18 wordsIf the Bloc members want to do the work, they should help us with electricity and our efforts.Off point