“Mr. Speaker, my Conservative colleague knows full well that Quebeckers and Canadians are struggling financially. Groceries are expensive. Everything is expensive. Even families that were well off not too long ago now have to make sacrifices and choices. There are solutions at our fingertips that could have been discussed in committee and that could have been discussed more broadly here in the House. For example, eliminating the subsidies to oil companies would generate about $27.5 billion in revenue for the government over five years. That is an estimate from the Parliamentary Budget Officer. Would my colleague agree with this type of measure, which would ease the financial burden on Quebeckers and Canadians?”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 72. The grade is held to 65, 30 above Relevance.
65 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 30 wordsmy colleague highlights the value and importance of committee work, wherein questions can be asked, ideas can be brought to the government and the government has to defend these things.Positioning · 28 wordsOn the specific issue he raises, I think there are a lot of things with the government, like a lot of spending that happens, that is completely wasteful.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 11 wordsWe talk about consultants, we talk about all kinds of things, Reasoning · 12 wordsand we need to be going through and talking about these things.Off pointThe ask · 8 wordsThe government actually needs to be prioritizing spending.Partly on pointAnecdote · 25 wordsA lot of us joke that if we had a chance to get into the books, we could probably save billions and billions of dollars, AnecdoteVague promiseReasoning · 10 wordsand we could be using that money much more effectively.Partly on point