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Mel Arnold

161 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 19 wordsI rise today to recognize the passing of long-time city councillor, regional district director and former chair Kevin Flynn.1Procedure Claims · 55 wordsKevin’s leadership earned him the deep respect of the community he served so passionately, yet for all his dedication to public service, Kevin’s greatest joy was his family. He leaves behind his beloved wife Cathy, his proud sons Chris and Curtis, daughters-in-law Katherine and Stephanie, 2and his three cherished grandsons, who affectionately called him “Grump-Pa.”3 Anecdote · 43 wordsThe name may reflect Kevin’s armchair coaching and reffing style. Following Kevin’s social media during games, when there was a bad coaching decision or questionable referee or empire call, we could count on Kevin to say clearly what the call should have been.Anecdote Claims · 40 wordsKevin called it like he saw it. That is the way he went through life, and in his role as city councillor and regional district director and chair. His integrity, laughter and dedication will be clearly missed but not forgotten. Thanks · 4 wordsRest in peace, Kevin.Thanks

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