Analysis · Members' statement · beta

David Bexte

177 words · 16 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 89 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 33%Positioning 23%Reasoning 19%Promise 7%Procedure 3%The ask 14%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 19 wordsCanadians are less safe today than they were a decade ago. Violent crime has risen by 55% since 2015.1 Positioning · 9 wordsLiberal weak-on-crime policies have left Canadians feeling less secure.Positioning Reasoning · 20 wordsPolice need effective tools to stop dangerous criminals. With proper judicial authorization, lawful access is key to investigating serious crimes. Promise · 13 wordsThat is why Conservatives are prepared to support part 1 of Bill C-22. Procedure · 6 wordsPart 2, though, raises serious questions.Procedure Claims · 40 wordsI have heard from many of my neighbours who fear elements of this legislation are overreaching. They likely infringe on the privacy rights of law-abiding Canadians. The Canadian Constitution Foundation has warned that part 2 risks creating a “surveillance state”.2 Reasoning · 14 wordsCanadians should not have to choose between public safety and protecting their fundamental freedoms. Positioning · 32 wordsThe Liberals promised to listen and make changes. Instead, they are ramming a contentious bill through Parliament. The Liberals are ignoring legitimate concerns raised by experts and Canadians. They should be embarrassed.Positioning The ask · 24 wordsThe government should swiftly pass part 1, give police the tools they need and then go back to the drawing board with part 2.

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