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Sherry Romanado

80 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Jacques Gourde (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, delays in the delivery of support ships for the Canadian Navy have been growing longer for years. Meanwhile, the Liberals are threatening to end the lease agreement for the MV Asterix, which is in perfect condition. Does the Liberal government intend to renew the lease or purchase the MV Asterix?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
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Claims 81%Positioning 19%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 65 wordswe are strengthening the Royal Canadian Navy from coast to coast to coast, with billions of dollars in investments in the context of one of the largest shipbuilding programs.Vague promise This is the largest investment in the Royal Canadian Navy since the Second World War. It includes six Arctic and offshore patrol ships, 15 Canadian combat ships, two joint support ships and up to 12 submarines.1 Positioning · 15 wordsThe Government of Canada is proud to make generational investments in the Canadian Armed Forces.PositioningPartly on point

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