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Gary Anandasangaree

35 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Bob Zimmer (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, as we can hear from my Quebec colleagues, obviously that was not a good answer to the member’s question. Liberal government documents confirm that nearly 18% of the firearms being confiscated by the Liberal gun grab are .22-calibre rifles, often used to hunt gophers or to shoot pop cans. Why are Liberals wasting hundreds of millions of dollars on .22s, or “plinkers”, instead of millions of dollars on police officers to lock up violent criminals?”
Statement grade
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Average 85 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 17%Claims 74%Procedure 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordsthe misinformation, sadly, continues on firearms.Positioning Claims · 26 wordsAs members are aware, over 140,000 firearms have been declared by individual Canadians as well as businesses.1 We are in the process of collecting those firearms.Vague promise Procedure · 3 wordsWhat I will— ProcedureSome hon. members: Oh, oh!

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