Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Eric Lefebvre

1371 words · 92 sentences · 108 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
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Procedure 8%Thanks 9%Claims 50%Positioning 18%Reasoning 7%The ask 8%Aside 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsfirst of all, I would like to deviate slightly from protocol, ProcedureThanks · 23 wordsas I would like to speak about a colleague who is held in high regard by all. His zest for life is unmatched.Thanks Claims · 18 wordsI am, of course, referring to our colleague from Côte-du-Sud—Rivière-du-Loup—Kataskomiq—Témiscouata, who suffered a serious medical emergency last week.1 Thanks · 64 wordsI would like to commend his assistant, Lauriane, who acted with calm and composure. Without her, our colleague would probably no longer be with us today. I thank her for what she did. On behalf of the member for Côte-du-Sud—Rivière-du-Loup—Kataskomiq—Témiscouata, I would also like to thank all my colleagues on both sides of the House who have written to wish him a speedy recovery.Thanks Claims · 29 wordsIt is clear that we can rise above our differences and move beyond party politics.Unearned certainty This member is clearly held in high regard by all our colleagues in Ottawa.Unearned certainty Thanks · 36 wordsFinally, on behalf of all parliamentarians, I would like to wish my colleague a speedy recovery. May he get plenty of rest and return to us in fine form in the fall. Be well, my friend.Thanks Procedure · 64 wordsI am very pleased to rise in the House today to speak to Bill C-30, spring economic update 2026 implementation act. As the parliamentary session draws to a close and members return to their communities, I want to take this solemn moment to offer a rigorous assessment of the past few months, an assessment that, unfortunately, can be summed up in a single word: ProcedurePositioning · 34 wordsrespect. Actually, it is more accurately described as flagrant, persistent, calculated and insulting disrespect on the part of the Liberal government, day after day, toward Parliament, toward our democratic institutions, and toward all Canadians.PositioningPartly on point Reasoning · 8 wordsThe Parliament of Canada is a sacred place. Claims · 27 wordsThis is where 343 duly elected members gather to convey the voices, fears, hopes and needs of over 40 million citizens from coast to coast to coast. Positioning · 31 wordsIt is the beating heart of our democracy.Off point What have the Liberals been doing throughout this parliamentary session, and particularly over the past two weeks? They have been stifling democratic debate.Positioning Claims · 87 wordsThey have been shutting down debate over and over through heavy-handed closure motions on bills that are critically important to the future of our country. They shut down debate on Bill C‑14.2 They shut down debate on Bill C‑26.3 They shut down debate on Bill C‑20.4 They shut down debate on Bill C‑9.5Off point Finally, they shut down debate on Bill C‑30.6 Elected officials did not have the time to study the legislation, question experts in committee or amend the clauses, which needed quite a bit of work. Positioning · 42 wordsI have a simple question, one that millions of taxpayers are asking: How can Canadians trust the Liberals to manage their money? That is a fundamental question. The Conservatives are asking this on behalf of Canadians, who are still awaiting an answer.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 7 wordsThis government’s contempt does not stop there.Procedure Positioning · 12 wordsThe Liberals have shown that they have no respect for taxpayers’ money.Positioning Claims · 20 wordsDay after day, Canadians send money to Ottawa and ask us to manage it wisely in order to deliver services. Reasoning · 7 wordsThat is what we need to do. Positioning · 16 wordsHowever, what the Liberals have done is add more bureaucracy and create a never‑ending financial fiasco.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 3 wordsFacts are facts.ProcedureUnearned certainty Claims · 17 wordsThe Cúram software project had an initial budget of $1.75 billion.7 It ended up costing $6.6 billion.8 Positioning · 23 wordsInstead of calling for an investigation, expressing outrage and saying that this is unacceptable, what did the Liberals do in the economic update?Positioning Claims · 115 wordsThey added another $500 million to that project.9 Employees are telling us that what they need is not more money, but to be heard. Employees working with the Cúram system have written to me and spoken to me over the phone. They say that the system is not working and that they are not being listened to, unfortunately. I reached out to the minister. I offered to meet with her and with the employees who use the Cúram system so that they can tell us what is not working so that she could fix it. She turned down my offer. Employees are willing to help us and to help the Liberal government fix this fiasco, Positioning · 11 wordsbut what did the Liberals do? They turned a deaf ear.Positioning Claims · 68 wordsThe situation involving Maritime Launch Services is a financial scandal. A private company is leasing a parcel of land for $13,500 and subleasing it to the federal government for $20 million a year for 10 years, for a total of $200 million.10 Then the government asks Canadians to send a portion of their hard-earned paycheque every Thursday, telling them that it is going to manage the money properly. Positioning · 3 wordsIt is embarrassing.Positioning Claims · 153 wordsI asked the minister some clear questions. Who signed the contract? Who read the contract? When did the minister meet with that company? I did not get any answers. For the past few years, we have been fortunate to have social media to keep us connected to the population. People are furious. They are writing to ask me whether the minister gave me an answer and whether he told me who signed the contract. They are asking why I am not allowed to know who signed the contract. This is a flagrant breakdown in transparency on the part of the government.Off point I asked the minister if I could go meet with the government employees who are telling us that things are not working right but that they are prepared to help us. They have been working with the system for years and are ready to help us because they know it inside out. The ask · 22 wordsI am asking the minister to let me go meet with these employees so that they can explain what is going wrong, Reasoning · 5 wordsbecause that is our role. Claims · 7 wordsThe minister refuses to meet with them. Procedure · 4 wordsThis is no joke.Procedure Claims · 66 wordsPeople working for the government want to help us, but the government refuses to meet with them. Canadians are frustrated about the way things are being handled, and opposition members are frustrated about how we are being treated right now.Partly on point When I asked the minister a question about the lease, he said he would set up a meeting so I could get to know some astronauts. Positioning · 5 wordsQuite frankly, that is embarrassing.Positioning Claims · 16 wordsI do not want to meet with the astronauts; I want to meet with the managers.Off point Reasoning · 57 wordsOur role is to manage the money that Canadians entrust to us. We must manage this money the way good fathers and mothers do and, above all, the way good managers do. We need to use that money wisely. We must give Canadians services that are worth the money they entrust to us. That is our role.Partly on point Claims · 13 wordsHowever, right now, the government is operating by stifling debate over and over. Positioning · 18 wordsThe government is muzzling the opposition and working without respecting Canadians and the money they entrust to us.Positioning Claims · 19 wordsWe are getting ready to go back to our ridings, get back to our communities and see our constituents. The ask · 18 wordsI hope that my Liberal colleagues will also go out and meet with Canadians and listen to them.Partly on point Claims · 26 wordsI have had the privilege of serving at both the municipal and provincial levels, and now I have the privilege of serving at the federal level.Off point Procedure · 7 wordsI have always said the same thing: ProcedureReasoning · 15 wordsIt is a great privilege to be the eyes, ears and voice of our constituents.Off point The ask · 16 wordsI hope the Liberals will be the eyes, ears and voice of their constituents this summer, Positioning · 28 wordsbecause they are probably going to be surprised by what they hear. Canadians are not happy that their public finances are being mismanaged. They do not like that.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 17 wordsIn closing, I would like to share my hopes for when Parliament returns from the summer recess.Procedure The ask · 47 wordsI hope the government will respect Parliament and answer questions honestly, so that we get real answers. I hope the government will invest in the community rather than continuing to fund bureaucracy. I hope the government will manage Canadians’ money in a responsible, disciplined and transparent manner. Aside · 11 wordsThe people listening to us are probably thinking I am dreaming.AsidePartly on point Positioning · 25 wordsOn this side of the House, we will always be there to stand up for Canadians and to ensure that their money is managed wisely.PositioningOff pointVague promise

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