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Yves Perron

125 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Elizabeth May (Green)
“Mr. Speaker, I particularly appreciated my colleague’s comments regarding division 8 of Bill C-30. He addressed the issue of pesticides and said that reducing health and environmental protections in the agricultural sector is very serious. I just want to ask him if he has any further comments to add.”
Statement grade
C+
67 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 30%Positioning 26%Reasoning 10%Claims 34%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 37 wordsI thank my colleague for her question because it gives me an opportunity to elaborate on my point, especially if any farmers are listening to us right now and wondering whether we are still working for them.Thanks Positioning · 15 wordsOf course we are. We work for their best interest and in everyone’s best interest.Positioning Reasoning · 5 wordsWe must retain some control. Claims · 25 wordsThis gives me an opportunity to explain that what we are criticizing is a lack of efficiency. We do not want to take control away. Reasoning · 8 wordsIt is important to be guided by science. Claims · 17 wordsA whole lot of people in Parliament have been enjoying saying the words “science-based” all week long, Partly on pointPositioning · 18 wordsbut I am not sure whether 25% of them even understand what it means when they say it.PositioningOff point

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