Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Mona Fortier

175 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

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Greeting 6%Claims 70%Aside 1%Thanks 9%Reasoning 14%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 11 wordsI am sure you are one who appreciates a great shawarma.Greeting Claims · 64 wordsOn June 7, the second edition of the shawarma festival was held in my riding in the Byward Market.1 More than 20,000 people attended.2 It was a massive success and a very tasty one. A major highlight was the successful attempt to set a new Guinness World Record for the longest shawarma wrap in the world, which reached an impressive length of 373.53 metres.3 Aside · 2 wordsImagine that.Aside Claims · 58 wordsThis remarkable effort resulted in a total of 2,451 sandwiches that were donated to the Shepherds of Good Hope.4 What is more, I had the privilege of serving as a judge to crown the best shawarma in Ottawa. After tasting nine shawarmas, Boustan took first prize, with 3 Brothers and Shawarma Palace coming in second and third, respectively.5 Thanks · 16 wordsI want to thank Moe Mosalam and the Giza Entertainment team for hosting an incredible event.Thanks Reasoning · 24 wordsThis is proof that when our community comes together, we do not just break records. We build a stronger, more caring city for everyone.

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