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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 106 wordsJune is ALS Awareness Month.1As a progressive and fatal neurodegenerative disease, ALS, or Lou Gehrig’s disease, gradually reduces a person’s ability to move, speak, eat and, eventually, breathe.2Daily life changes within months of diagnosis, and life expectancy is dramatically reduced.However, there is hope.Researchers are making impressive advances in ALS treatment.Last year, scientists at Sunnybrook hospital’s Hurvitz brain sciences program in Don Valley West achieved a world first by non-invasively delivering immunotherapy directly to the brain of an ALS patient.3Home to Canada’s largest ALS clinic, Sunnybrook is steadily improving care for patients with ALS.4The ALS Society is central to this.Thanks · 40 wordsTo them, I say congratulations for nearly 50 years of advocacy representing Canadians with ALS.5Lastly, to patients with ALS, like the late Mauril Bélanger and my friend Chris May, and to their families, their courage inspires us every day.Thanks