Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Claims 62%Reasoning 14%Thanks 20%Positioning 5%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 85 wordsmore than 3,000 volunteers helped collect over 200,000 signatures from Albertans who are determined to protect our mountains, our rivers and our drinking water from the threat of coal mining.1Albertans have spoken loudly and clearly.They know coal mining threatens critical watersheds, harms our wildlife habitat and risks contaminating the water that communities, ranchers, farmers and indigenous peoples depend upon.Unearned certaintyFor years, Albertans have been fighting to stop reckless coal development in one of the most beautiful and ecologically important regions in our country.Reasoning · 19 wordsToday’s achievement is proof that when governments refuse to listen, citizens will organize and make themselves impossible to ignore.Thanks · 27 wordsCongratulations to Corb Lund, the Water Not Coal campaign and the hundreds of thousands of Albertans who stood up for our Rocky Mountains and our shared future.ThanksPositioning · 7 wordsI am so proud to represent them.Positioning