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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 69 wordsJuly 1 is fast approaching and, when it comes to tackling the housing crisis, there is a prominent local figure who stands out from the crowd and refuses to give in to fatalism.Jean-François Tremblay, an impact real estate investor—but more importantly, a man of compassion—is demonstrating that it is possible to innovate and take concrete action to meet a fundamental need like that of having a decent home.PositioningClaims · 52 wordsHis project, Domicile Fixe, offers 30 highly affordable homes in Vieux-Iberville, 1while meeting a wide range of criteria, including LEED, WELL and universal accessibility standards.2Even more remarkable is that these homes, which are untouchable by speculators, are based on a financial structure that receives no subsidies from any level of government.3Positioning · 27 wordsJean-François Tremblay is a builder who dreams bigger than the others.His dreams are never an end in themselves, but rather the starting point for great achievements.PositioningThanks · 19 wordsAs he prepares to welcome a new addition to his family, I send him my warmest wishes for happiness.4ThanksPositioning · 13 wordsJust like his projects, this new adventure holds great promise for the future.PositioningThanks · 6 wordsI would like to thank Jean-François.Thanks