Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 56 wordsthis year marks the 250th anniversary of the battle of Trois‑Rivières, a historic milestone that occurred on June 8, 1776, in my beautiful riding.1At the time, the American colonies were trying to make Canada and Quebec their fourteenth colony.2However, they suffered a crushing defeat at Trois‑Rivières and retreated.3That battle marked a turning point.Reasoning · 35 wordsIt helped to preserve our identity, our territory and our ability to stand up for ourselves.In many ways, this is where it all began for the sovereign and independent country that we are today.Claims · 56 wordsThis battle helped shape the destiny of what would become Canada and reminds us that my region played a defining role in our country’s history.Two hundred and fifty years later, we are commemorating not only this historic event but also the rich heritage of Trois‑Rivières and the work of those who preserve our collective memory.The ask · 19 wordsI therefore invite everyone to come visit our region this summer and discover this important chapter in our history.